You offer some excellent reasons on why football may have grown/declined in the 4 areas [participation, provision, spectatorship, media coverage] such as lower league teams beating higher up teams making the league more exciting, increase of technology e.g. games consoles and then the growth of womens football.
What you need to include though is an opening sentence/paragraph that simply says "football participation (or media coverage etc.) is growing - from *this much* to *this much*"
This should be the easier part so well done on getting the harder bit done first!!
Same for the snooker - you've offered reasons why snooker may be getting more exciting to watch but haven't said exactly how this has affected growth in the sport i.e. more exciting so more people watch?
sir can you have a look through my bowls news artical and see if thats ok and if theres anything else i can add to it as i dont really know much about bowls so i dont know what to look for?
Sam,
ReplyDeleteYou offer some excellent reasons on why football may have grown/declined in the 4 areas [participation, provision, spectatorship, media coverage] such as lower league teams beating higher up teams making the league more exciting, increase of technology e.g. games consoles and then the growth of womens football.
What you need to include though is an opening sentence/paragraph that simply says "football participation (or media coverage etc.) is growing - from *this much* to *this much*"
This should be the easier part so well done on getting the harder bit done first!!
Same for the snooker - you've offered reasons why snooker may be getting more exciting to watch but haven't said exactly how this has affected growth in the sport i.e. more exciting so more people watch?
sir can you have a look through my bowls news artical and see if thats ok and if theres anything else i can add to it as i dont really know much about bowls so i dont know what to look for?
ReplyDeletethanks
sam